Going over Workshop Notes

I'm going back over the first 5000 words for Maradaine Constabulary-- the piece I used at the ArmadilloCon Workshop-- and making tweaks based on the notes I received.

One thing I'm noticing that's different from earlier years is most of the notes are along the lines of, "This is good", and "This works well" and questions that arise from things in the text.  Questions that are, for the most part, addressed in the next 5000 words.

So that makes me feel pretty good about this piece.  It's coming together pretty well, I think.   Now I just have to finish it.